halarryus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Spider]

It wasn't bad

The animations could be better. The audio really needs improvement and next time don't show a drawing of your dick.

MrBobo64 responds:

noted, but I did need you to know what we were dealing with here. Thank you.

[Holy crap a miracle]

Redundent(my spelling sucks)

It was kinda cool but if you would of made the little thing do different crap every once in a while it might of been better.

TehDiseased responds:

You don't get it, do you?

[War in Downtown Toronto]

Keep at it

I thought it was good but you could of done it better. It was a little to fast and the animation could be more smooth. For a first try it was pretty good. If you keep it up you could make some pretty cool flash videos.

Rational-Delirium responds:

Thanks for the review. There are lots of things in that cartoon that could be better, but after doing 1500 frames of work it's pretty hard to go back and fix it all. Don't worry, I haven't stopped animating, and the quality of my submissions should get better because my brother and sister are helping me now (mainly with art).